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Met
in a merged path
My
breath paused
It
was an iceberg
Cold
in complexion.
It
walked amongst
The
vengeful hearts
The
façade was
Fully
deceptive, on.
A
friendship ensued
It
took all I had
But
still wanted more
I
slowly became weary.
Restless
minds
One
act damaged,
The
second, destroyed
You
can hear it
In
the silent hearts.
It
shrieks; a monster
Revenge
created chaos
I
reached the third act.
I
climbed down the step
Until
I found my heart
It
was damaged.
It
needed repair.
I
broke the chain
Holding
me to it
Reluctantly,
it left.
My
breath returned.
-Erick Flores
This was extremely well written and holds so much truth! I liked the last four lines especially and the way it progressed. Thanks for sharing this. I hope you join The Pantry again. I look forward to reading more of your work!
ReplyDelete@Laura Maria, thank you for commenting on my poem! I am glad that you liked my poem. I look forward to seeing more comments from you. Feel free to look around when you get the chance.
ReplyDelete-Erick Flores
divine thoughts.
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ReplyDelete-Erick Flores
Excellent poetry Erick!! I loved the format and metaphor as well as the imagery. Wonderfully crafted.
ReplyDeleteMr. Evans, I cannot emphasize enough how much it means to see your comments. Thank you for your continual support!
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