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Wednesday, November 30, 2011

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It interrupted the sunny morning,
It transformed it into gloom,
I awaited the wrath to come,
The Earth cried immediately,
Leaving traces on the rich soil,
All living creature hid from it,
They were compassionate!
Earth gave its last cry; the storm,
It devoured everything on its path;
It was hungry for sympathy.
It reminded us all of the fact;
The Earth is very much alive.
There was peace in the chaos.
Always will be.

-Erick Flores

8 comments:

  1. Hi Erick, got your email and here I am, sorry I haven't commented sooner. I like the last two lines the best, but overall it's a good poem, lookforward to reading more.

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  2. Hello sir! I am glad to hear you were able to see my email. Glad to have you here. If you get the chance, feel free to browse around the other poems I have published on my blog. It would mean a lot. Thank you once again for the comment and support!

    -Erick Flores

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  3. "Earth gave it's last cry," ...very, very good, nature, your soul and poetic metaphor, who could ask for more. I glanced at your Reading List as well, good reading....have you read "Man and Woman He Created Them: A Theology of the Body," by John Paul II??? I think you have the mature depth to handle his vision of espousal love.

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  4. Hello! Thank you for that analytical commentary! I have not read that book, but if you recommend it, I will definitely look into it and give it a read. Thank you for the recommendation. I will keep you updated.
    -Erick Flores

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  5. Erick,

    I loved this poem for the reasons of human fear and the power of nature.
    At a time when a reawakening may happen, when the balance is disturbed.

    Following your excellent Blog!

    Eileen

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  6. Hello Mrs. O'Neil,

    I am glad you caught the essence of this poem. Thank you for commenting!

    Erick Flores

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  7. Greetings:

    Happy Happy New Year.

    Appreciated your support of 2011,

    Best Wishes for the year of 2012…

    Your contribution is always welcome!

    Lots of blessings and cheers sending your way.

    See you soon.

    xoxox

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  8. Hello Promising Poets Parking lot,
    thank you for the wishes! Wish you a happy new year as well!
    -Erick Flores

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