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Wednesday, December 28, 2011

Façade (Original)


http://magpietales.blogspot.com/2011/12/mag-97.html
The sparkle in her eyes,
Something about it,
Doesn’t quite captivate.
Her eyes are deceiving,
Just like the smile,
It was carefully molded.
How many today,
Become part of this lie?
Sadness carefully hidden.
A beautiful lie to stay.
Tonight she will be one,
Tomorrow, another.

-Erick Flores

10 comments:

  1. I enjoyed this ... and tomorrow, yet another.

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  2. So very true Erick....beautifully written!

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  3. so many or maybe too many i shall say become part of this lie ... very beautiful Erick! a very happy new year to you and all the best to you!!!

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  4. Hello Helen!
    Thank you for commenting! It means a lot to see your comment on here. Hope all is well!

    -Erick Flores

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  5. Hello Carrie,
    How are you? Thank you for your comment! Glad to see your positive remark!
    -Erick Flores

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  6. Hello Birdie,
    thank you for commenting!
    Happy new year to you as well!
    -Erick Flores

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  7. A beautiful lie indeed. Nicely penned, Erick.

    And A Happy New Year to you and your family.

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  8. Hello Lena, thank you for sharing your thoughts! Happy New Year to you and your family as well!

    -Erick Flores

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  9. "Sadness carefully hidden."
    True that.
    You take a reality and carefully mold it into beautiful words, yourself :)
    Short, yet strong piece.

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  10. Hello Aura. Thank you for your captivating comment!
    Happy New Year to you and your family!
    -Erick Flores

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