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Wednesday, December 28, 2011

Façade (Original)


http://magpietales.blogspot.com/2011/12/mag-97.html
The sparkle in her eyes,
Something about it,
Doesn’t quite captivate.
Her eyes are deceiving,
Just like the smile,
It was carefully molded.
How many today,
Become part of this lie?
Sadness carefully hidden.
A beautiful lie to stay.
Tonight she will be one,
Tomorrow, another.

-Erick Flores
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10 comments:

  1. HelenDecember 29, 2011 at 10:27 AM

    I enjoyed this ... and tomorrow, yet another.

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  2. Carrie Van HornDecember 29, 2011 at 10:34 AM

    So very true Erick....beautifully written!

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  3. AnonymousDecember 29, 2011 at 11:14 AM

    so many or maybe too many i shall say become part of this lie ... very beautiful Erick! a very happy new year to you and all the best to you!!!

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  4. UnknownDecember 29, 2011 at 9:23 PM

    Hello Helen!
    Thank you for commenting! It means a lot to see your comment on here. Hope all is well!

    -Erick Flores

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  5. UnknownDecember 29, 2011 at 9:23 PM

    Hello Carrie,
    How are you? Thank you for your comment! Glad to see your positive remark!
    -Erick Flores

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  6. UnknownDecember 29, 2011 at 9:26 PM

    Hello Birdie,
    thank you for commenting!
    Happy new year to you as well!
    -Erick Flores

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  7. HelenaDecember 30, 2011 at 3:02 PM

    A beautiful lie indeed. Nicely penned, Erick.

    And A Happy New Year to you and your family.

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  8. UnknownDecember 30, 2011 at 11:59 PM

    Hello Lena, thank you for sharing your thoughts! Happy New Year to you and your family as well!

    -Erick Flores

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  9. AnonymousDecember 31, 2011 at 12:46 AM

    "Sadness carefully hidden."
    True that.
    You take a reality and carefully mold it into beautiful words, yourself :)
    Short, yet strong piece.

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  10. UnknownDecember 31, 2011 at 5:49 PM

    Hello Aura. Thank you for your captivating comment!
    Happy New Year to you and your family!
    -Erick Flores

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