Original Photography by: +Lotus Carroll https://plus.google.com/u/0/102476152658204495450/photos |
In
a dark corridor,
Full of life, it stood.
Glossy and clean.
Full of life, it stood.
Glossy and clean.
Vivid
its colors shone.
Amazed,
they clearly were,
Of
such powerful depiction.
A
vivid display of,
What
once was there,
Would
remain quarantined.
In seconds,
The colors slowly faded,
The memories quickly wore away.
Months, it took,
For the ashes to give way,
For what once was inspiration.
In seconds,
The colors slowly faded,
The memories quickly wore away.
Months, it took,
For the ashes to give way,
For what once was inspiration.
-Erick Flores
© copyright Mon Dec 19 21:12:03 UTC 2011 - All Rights Reserved
remarkable.
ReplyDeleteGreetings:
ReplyDeleteHope all is well.
Come join our poetry picnic today,
Random poems are welcome in case you don’t have a theme fitting one.
First time participants can submit 1 to 3 random poems,
Best wishes.
Happy Holidays.
Looking forward to seeing you share.
xoxox
Hello @Jingle Poetry At The Gooseberry Garder!
ReplyDeleteThank you for your share! I will definitely go and submit my link! Blessings! Best wishes to you as well!
Erick Flores
Excellent, and wel written thoughts, Erck.
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dust to dust. i like this.
ReplyDeleteHello @Marbles in My Pocket,
ReplyDeletethank you for your thoughts! I will check yours out as well!
Erick Flores
Hey Ed,
ReplyDeletenice to see you back! Thank you for your positive comment!
Erick Flores
excellent work.
ReplyDeleteHello @Morning!
ReplyDeleteThank you for your nice comment!
-Erick Flores
Having just been introduced to your poetry I will be checking back on your progress.
ReplyDeleteKeep penning!
Cheers,
Mark Butkus
Hello @Bar None Publishing Group (BNPG),
ReplyDeletethank you for visiting! I am glad you were recommended here.
Blessings!
-Erick Flores
Looking forward to submitting @:
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"For what once was inspiration."
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poem, Erick. Inspired, indeed.
I love the structure of it too.
The three part sentences... they really give it this feeling of sustained attention... as though one is looking at that photograph.
well done :}
Aura, once again, you captivate me with your comments! Thank you for your support! Hope to continue hearing from you! Happy New Year by the way!
ReplyDelete-Erick Flores