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Small steps in the right direction,
The mountains depicted potential.
I was sitting in those last moments,
Our eyes met as I caught the beauty,
The beauty that captivated me,
It was only a few moments before,
And as I sit here waiting for your voice,
Chords that are serenely plucked,
I am amazed by the golden in your smile,
I have confused it with the sun before;
The way it’s warmly displayed with passion.
The sunset was our only witness,
How much beauty in one day!
-Erick Flores
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Yes, Erick, how much beauty there can be in one day!The beauty of a sunset, the beauty of a smile can both oftentimes inspire a smile and a warming of the heart.
ReplyDeleteI like the cadence of this poem...specially like your last line ~
ReplyDeletethis is so nice :)
ReplyDeleteHow much beauty in your words! I am a sky-lover and this title and picture caught my eye immediately...I esp. like 'Our eyes met as I caught the beauty,
ReplyDeleteThe beauty that captivated me,' and 'Chords that are serenely plucked,'...
Hello Mary,
ReplyDeleteYes, you are right! I sometimes like to greet people I don't know with a smile. Always good to pass happiness aroung.
Erick Flores
Hello @Heaven, thank you for those friendly words!
ReplyDelete@Patricia, thank you for your comment friend!
Hope you have a wonderful night.
Erick Flores
Hello @Janet,
ReplyDeletethank you for sharing your thoughts with me. I am glad to hear you are a sky lover! Nature holds so much hidden beauty.
Erick Flores
Hello @Morning,
ReplyDeletethank you for sharing your thoughts!
Erick Flores
hi Erick, awww, beautiful!!
ReplyDeleteHello @Birdie,
ReplyDeletethank you for your flattering comment! :D
Erick Flores