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Wednesday, December 14, 2011

Falling (Original)

Original Photography by: +Lotus Carroll
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She did not keep what her heart desired,
She spilled her emotions.
Onto her hand they secretly landed,
No one watched her.
She thought, “I have done it again,”
“Been here before.”
She had no one near to find a home,
A helpful hand.
Watch her slowly leave her presence,
She repeated it.
She waited years to finally find,
The lost years.
She was slowly falling a height to fall
On the right path.

-Erick Flores

8 comments:

  1. Beautiful piece. Sometimes it takes a lifetime before we finally do 'fall' into and onto our right path. This really is insightful, lovely.

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  2. Hello @Daydreamertoo,
    It is good to hear from you. It does sometimes take a lifetime, we are always learning something new everyday! Thank you!

    Erick Flores

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  3. Hi Erick, so often it takes us a very long time to learn what are the most important things in your life. As always, I find meaning in your poetry.

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  4. Hello Mary,
    I am always glad to read your comments. Thank you for your insightful commentary.
    Erick Flores

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  5. vivid capture of her and her story.
    smart metaphor.

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  6. Thank you @Morning,
    glad to hear from you.

    Erick Flores

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  7. Beautifully worded... She waited years to finally find, the lost years.

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  8. Hello Rachel,
    Thank you for reading my poem. It means a lot to see new readers. Yes, that's precisely what I was trying to express. Hope to see you here again!

    Erick Flores

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