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Monday, January 9, 2012

Train (Original)

Original Photography by: Kirk Daniel Carter
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Tomorrow's not promised,
Today might speed faster;
A careless train.
Whatever tomorrow becomes,
I will grasp your sorrow,
Only to become deception.

It was instantaneous,
It hit me without warning,
Everything derailed,
No explosion,
No evidence,
Only deception.


-Erick Flores

6 comments:

  1. There are tracks about 500 yds from my house so trains are a part of my life, I love poems about trains and railroad metaphors and you've used it cleverly here.

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  2. This is a great piece Erick, I can completely understand your message here...wonderful work and Kirk is awesome.

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  3. I love how hopeless this poem feels... how desperate and real.
    Very well written Erick :)

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  4. Hello @rch,
    that is really interesting. Thank you for sharing! I am sure you are used to the noise. Thank you for the positive comment!

    -Erick Flores

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  5. Hello Mr. Evans, thank you for always commenting. It means a lot. I am glad you understood the words I tried to share, and the message!
    Yes, Kirk is awesome!
    -Erick Flores

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  6. Hello Aura,
    wow, that is a deep comment. Yes, that is precisely what I was aiming for. :D Thank you for the comment!

    -Erick Flores

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