Thursday, January 12, 2012

Next to Me (Original) Registered & Protected

Original Photography by: +Lotus Carroll

The water runs down the road,
Watch how it slowly cleansed.
The bird in its second dream,
Is gently perched on the branch,
Thunder explodes the gentle night.
Yet in the verge of sadness,
Light that illuminates sends a signal.
A clear view of life, it gently comforts.

The wind carries the dreams across,
Sharing the delight of the night.
Test the sunrise at least once,
And taste the morning light.
In time, when you are next to me,
I will show you more than the sun.
Your smile sends a swift signal,
I’ll see you again, like the morning sun.
© copyright Thu Jan 12 23:28:08 UTC 2012 - All Rights Reserved

-Erick Flores


  1. fantastic second verse.

  2. A beautiful love poem for one lucky lover!

  3. @Sheelonee Mukherjee, thank you for your comment on this poem! Greatly appreciate it!

    -Erick Flores

  4. @Laurie Kolp,

    Indeed, many perspectives to this poem! Thank you for commenting!

    -Erick Flores

  5. I love this poem. It touches me deep. Thank you for sharing. By the way thanks for visiting my haiku-blog about Basho. Come again if you will, you're very welcome to comment.

  6. @Chèvrefeuille, thank you as well for commenting! I like hearing constructive, positive comments, such as yours! Hope all is well!
    -Erick F.

    1. Yes all is well, busy as always writing new haiku :-)