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Saturday, October 29, 2011

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A cloudy morning,
A sunny afternoon,
A rainy night,
Yet, noticed you were!

It's not that you mingled,
It's that you sprinkled
A bit of your trust,
Amongst the blue sky.

Distinguishable,
you were.
The aura,
Set forth by your shine.

As your tears filled
The lonely night--
Above all,
Your eyes were the night stars.

Slowly did I
fight away your fears.
My return.
A daily routine.

A comfort of warmth,
A gesture of appreciation.
I cleared the pain.
My arrival.

I chased the clouds away,
Illuminating your eyes.
The glow
Of a thousand stars.

Forecast,
Predictable, you are.
Yet, future holds
Unpredictable surprises.

-Erick Flores

I wrote this, because it reminds me of the different weather cycles that exist, and that can be attributed to a relationship. Please share your experiences as a comment. Enjoy!

6 comments:

  1. "It's not that you mingled,
    It's that you sprinkled
    A bit of your trust,
    Amongst the blue sky."
    You have such a musical way with words, Erick :)
    This poem was beautiful... and totally relatable.
    It's so exciting to read new work from you !

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  2. Thank you Aura (@underthepinksky). Your comments are always appreciated! :D

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  3. cleared the pain, your arrival?

    moving words, well done!
    Thanks for sharing.

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  4. Hello @Orange tree,

    I am glad to hear you loved it!
    Thank you for your kind words.

    -Erick Flores

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  5. Good Afternoon @Morning,
    glad to hear from you. Thank you for your comment!

    Erick Flores

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