A cloudy morning,
A sunny afternoon,
A rainy night,
Yet, noticed you were!
It's not that you mingled,
It's that you sprinkled
A bit of your trust,
Amongst the blue sky.
Distinguishable,
you were.
The aura,
Set forth by your shine.
As your tears filled
The lonely night--
Above all,
Your eyes were the night stars.
Slowly did I
fight away your fears.
My return.
A daily routine.
A comfort of warmth,
A gesture of appreciation.
I cleared the pain.
My arrival.
I chased the clouds away,
Illuminating your eyes.
The glow
Of a thousand stars.
Forecast,
Predictable, you are.
Yet, future holds
Unpredictable surprises.
A sunny afternoon,
A rainy night,
Yet, noticed you were!
It's not that you mingled,
It's that you sprinkled
A bit of your trust,
Amongst the blue sky.
Distinguishable,
you were.
The aura,
Set forth by your shine.
As your tears filled
The lonely night--
Above all,
Your eyes were the night stars.
Slowly did I
fight away your fears.
My return.
A daily routine.
A comfort of warmth,
A gesture of appreciation.
I cleared the pain.
My arrival.
I chased the clouds away,
Illuminating your eyes.
The glow
Of a thousand stars.
Forecast,
Predictable, you are.
Yet, future holds
Unpredictable surprises.
-Erick Flores
I wrote this, because it reminds me of the different weather cycles that exist, and that can be attributed to a relationship. Please share your experiences as a comment. Enjoy!
"It's not that you mingled,
ReplyDeleteIt's that you sprinkled
A bit of your trust,
Amongst the blue sky."
You have such a musical way with words, Erick :)
This poem was beautiful... and totally relatable.
It's so exciting to read new work from you !
Thank you Aura (@underthepinksky). Your comments are always appreciated! :D
ReplyDeletelove it,
ReplyDeletemind blowing imagery.
cleared the pain, your arrival?
ReplyDeletemoving words, well done!
Thanks for sharing.
Hello @Orange tree,
ReplyDeleteI am glad to hear you loved it!
Thank you for your kind words.
-Erick Flores
Good Afternoon @Morning,
ReplyDeleteglad to hear from you. Thank you for your comment!
Erick Flores