Wednesday, October 26, 2011

Let Them (Original) Registered & Protected

Let them invite you
With their artificial amity.
Let them admit to you
Their careless intentions.
Let them haunt you
Slowly, away from comfort.
Let them express to you
All their animosity.
Let them criticize you
For all that you have not done.
Let them hurt you,
For every good deed you fulfilled.
Let them traumatize you
With all the lies they created.
Let them degrade you
Away from all reality.
Let them transform you,
The once weak soul you were.

-Erick Flores


  1. i like this poem i read it so many times..Good job :))

  2. I am glad you liked it Patti. Thank you for your time!

  3. Erick, there are always people who try to tear you down! Steer clear, and know yourself.

  4. Mary, yes, indeed there are people like this. Thank you for the comment! Look forward to hearing from you again!

    Erick Flores

  5. Nice take on the prompt! Yes, there are always those ready to bruise one's ego~ I seem to run into that kind, more than I want!

  6. Hello Ella,
    I believe many of us feel the same as you do. Thank you for visiting!

    Erick Flores